I finally carved some time out at work to work on this silly thing. Lol I really want one but don't want all the planning and blah blah blah crap that goes along with it. Lol

I am going to eventually (soon) make it prettier but I wonder if you all could review the text and let me know if it all sounds ok. I don't know if I'm too wordy...not wordy enough.

Your input is appreciated! :squeeze

Could you put the link in your post so I can see it? :snicker I looked over the post thinking I was missin something. .LOL

Looks like you forgot the link Cathy! :D

Oh, Lord...What do you mean? You guys don't just KNOW my website address? Lol I did the same things with my friends...I was like 'look at this!' with no direction. Sorry about that.

www.geocities.com/fearlessbirth

:)

That looks GREAT!! I don't think its too wordy at all! I do think maybe you can have an "about you" page? Maybe to tell if you have children, what you think about birth, etc.. I know some people like that.. I have also heard from my workshop (I think) that people are 5 or 10 times more likely to call you if you have a picture of yourself on your website.. I'm not sure how true that is but just a FYI.. LOL

Yes, I do have a bit more work to do on it so THANK YOU for the tips. I think I will put a personal photo of myself just so people have a 'feel' for me before meeting me. I know I always feel weird meeting strangers cause you don't know if they are young or old or hippies or professionals or if they look nice. I know I'm generalizing but you get the idea...

Looks good! :yes

Under the "Once you've chosen me....." section, I'd make those bullet points.

I would also mention that the first meeting doesn't count towards the 2 prenatals (assuming) and it is free, no obligation blah blah blah.

Nice job, Cathy! :thumbs

I agree with everything that the other posters said about an "about me" page with a personal photo and bullet points for the "once you've chosen me" section. Bullet points are just much easier to read (like a list instead of a paragraph). You might also want to consider a separate page for link recommedations and/or book suggestions. I always like photo galleries, so maybe that's something that you could consider for the future.(???) All-in-all, it's a really great start! Oh, btw......I really like the purple background, too!!!! :yes