ACK! Another Website Critique :)

[ScootchsMom]

I am sure you all are sick of looking at websites by now, but can you take a look at mine? I having really put any content there yet, I'm working on the layout first. Is it easy to navigate? Can you read everything?

www.lilydoulaservices.com

Thanks!

Liz

[vanmomma]

I would take the ".com" out of your title and make it a bigger font.
And I would make your name in teh same colour, because the black is hard to read on the background.
Otherwise, the site looks very nice

[earthgirl]

[ScootchsMom]

Thanks

[saalmc]

I don't know if it's a font/color/background issue or just a typo, but right now your business name is reading as "Lilv" doula services...

The site looks great! Good work

[ScootchsMom]

Quote:

Originally Posted by saalmc I don't know if it's a font/color/background issue or just a typo, but right now your business name is reading as "Lilv" doula services... The site looks great! Good work

Yeah I saw that last night after I uploaded the changes. Its something to do with the text boxes on the template. I'll have to fix it. Thanks

[b'earth angel]

I like it. It's very clean and crisp. Not over crowded or overwhelming. The picture is lovely. I noticed the "Lilv" thing also. Nice work.

[sheila]

It looks very nice!

[Kacy]

It looks very nice! The menu is fun to play with, hehe.

[emmabella]

The design is okay, but the content that you inputted needs some work. The titles of each page like "Our Services" are smaller than the text on the page, which doesn't make sense. I would left-align the title and make it larger. The body text on each page should be a smaller font and I suggest justify-ing the text or at very least left aligning. Overall you need more content so keep writing away when you get a chance.